Hi, great video! Here are a few observations:

  1. 0:53 to 1:03 could be cut – the music builds up, but nothing happens visually.
  2. 16:9 would work better – the ultra-wide format only looks good on ultra-wide monitors (though the video quality itself is excellent).
  3. Use the white Systemcheats logo – the black one gets lost in dark scenes.
  4. More dynamic kills, less regular running around – keeps the energy high.


Overall, awesome job! The editing transitions are on point, especially for a first attempt. Huge potential here!