I have to agree on the quality department, if you been trying to render it as 720p, you should've recorded in-game at that resolution. Which is 1280x720
However, with a few improvements here and there, I can see it being used towards rewarding system.
The watermark can be easily fixed with a proper crop by holding shift (In most programs) scale it accordingly, so it won't be so warped.
Good job on the 1st video tho!
The rewarding system information can be found here: https://www.systemcheats.net/forum/s...warding-System