The problem is you are wasting time on your cuts. There is clear 4-5 seconds of you doing nothing or just getting angles on shooting people. Then spend the next 30 seconds on the next "cut" shooting at people a billion KM away and hitting them once.
The idea of the video is it's supposed to be engaging and showcase the cheat. Nobody wants to see you play a whole ass game. Put the parts where you get kills/multi-kills and good kills. That is it.
1 Kill should not take more than 7-8 seconds tops. Only If you are getting multiple kills in a short span you don't transition out of the part.
In the cut that starts at second 47 to min 1.27, somebody would have already clicked off the video.
You are shooting people but not killing them 0 action going on.
Also, what's with the stupid transition effect that is going on at 1:19 & 1:27? It's annoying and it's not transitioning into anything. Couldn't bear to watch the video afterward.
You missed the mark on this one.