Thanks for the video buddy. What I am going to tell you, it's going to be positive criticism.
There is some parts that is boring, while you wait for the enemies or when you're going towards them. That's the boring part.
Those are boring parts, at least to me. This month is anyway done, so I advise you for next month to try using more cuts on the videos, and removing boring parts.
Also, make a music a little bit louder. It's too quiet.