Originally Posted by
Psychopath
I can see you been trying to improve, but for some reason you are going backwards rather than forward.
The intro considered to be a whole minute, which is totally wrong. Max intro including showing menu should not be more than 30 secs IMO.
The quality.. I'm not sure what you use to render, but it seems like there is something wrong about your settings. Also, if you record in 720p, then render at 720p. I really wouldn't suggest trying to render on a higher resolution while recording on lower. It's zoomed in and if you do it incorrectly, there will be jagged edges as in your video.
If you really want to dedicate time into making cool promo videos, watch a lot of them on youtube, get a hang of it how others doing it. And most importantly, watch tutorials on how to properly record your gameplay using OBS or Nvidia Shadowplay as an example and what settings to use.. Of course render settings as well.